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Task A2: Comment Writing - AI in the Workplace
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AI is important topic now. 1 Many peoples talks about it. Should we use AI at work? This is big question.
5 First, AI maybe take jobs from humans. Workers worry about this. Factory robots do work what people do before. 3 Is bad for workers.
5 Second, data is not safe. 2 Company have data about workers. This data maybe stolen. Workers not happy about this.
5 But AI good too. Robots do 4 boring work. Peoples can 4 do other thing. 3 This is good.
Your fastest win: subject-verb agreement
One pattern accounts for many of your slips: 'people talk' (not 'peoples talks'), 'companies have' (not 'company have'). Learning this single rule will improve several sentences at once. Start with Exercise 1 on page 3.
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You are expressing real ideas here, and that is the foundation. Your reader understands what you mean, which is good. Now let us work on one specific pattern that will help you quickly. When you write "Many peoples", you are mixing singular and plural. "Peoples" is rarely used. The correct form is "many people" (plural noun, stays the same). When you write "Company have data", you need "companies" (plural) or "the company has" (singular). Let us focus on this one pattern.
"People" is already plural. So it needs a plural verb: "people talk". Try this: cover "peoples" with your finger and replace it with "people". Now it reads "many people talks". Do the verb next: "people" needs "talk", not "talks".
Your sentences are easy to understand, which is great. Most of them are short and simple: "AI is important." "This is bad." These are solid sentences. But you notice how they all follow the same pattern? You have a subject, then a verb, then a small idea. Let us try adding just a little more to some sentences. Not every sentence needs to be long, but mixing short and slightly longer sentences makes your writing feel stronger.
This is a fragment (no subject). Try: "This is bad for workers." Or better: "This job loss is bad for workers." The second one has more information and sounds more confident.
You are using words correctly, and that is a real strength. Your reader never has to guess what you mean. You are ready to expand your vocabulary a little. Instead of "good" and "bad", English has so many other choices. "Bad" could be "harmful", "dangerous", or "problematic". "Good" could be "helpful", "beneficial", or "useful". These are not hard words, but they make your writing sound more mature.
This is clear, and that is good. To level up: "data is not secure" or "data is not protected". These words are only slightly more formal, but they show growth.
You understand the topic (AI in the workplace), but your text does not yet show that understanding through vocabulary. You use the word "AI" correctly, which is a start. Now let us add a few more topic words. When you write about job loss, you could say "displacement" or "automation" instead of just "take jobs". These are words your teacher uses when teaching this topic. Learning them will help you sound more confident.
This is understandable, but the grammar is awkward. Better: "perform tasks that humans previously did". The word "tasks" and "previously" are more precise. "Perform" is more formal than "do".
You have two counter-arguments, which shows you understand the task. Right now they are at the claim level: "AI maybe take jobs" and "data is not safe". The next step is adding a reason (why?) and an example (such as?) to each one. Your own argument is started but needs the same treatment. You are building the right foundation.
This is a claim. It states the idea but does not explain why or give an example. The structure to aim for: Claim + Reason + Example.
Your text has a clear beginning that names the topic. You separate counter-arguments from your own arguments into different paragraphs. That is the right instinct. The bridge between them ("But AI good too") is brief but functional. Your next step is building longer paragraphs with more detail, and using a stronger bridge sentence.
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Fill in the correct article or verb. Choose one.
a) "Many ____ (person / people) talks about AI."
b) "Data ____ (is / are) important to protect."
c) "The company ____ (have / has) information about workers."
Rewrite each short sentence by adding one more detail.
a) Original: "This is bad for workers."
b) Original: "This is good."
Choose the word that is more formal and stronger than "good".
Complete with the correct domain word.
a) "Job ____ (loss / taking) happens when robots replace workers."
b) "____ (Machines / Automation) helps companies work faster."
c) "Worker ____ (worry / concerns) about technology are real."
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